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A Case of Modern Disconnect by ~StrangeChilde:iconStrangeChilde:

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You are connected
you stupid, fucking modem --
why aren't you working?
©2008-2009 ~StrangeChilde
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Submitted: April 25, 2008
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A haiku expressing my rage at not being able to get the wireless Internet to work.

Have to call BMTS tomorrow.

Napowrimo day 25.

Karen McMichael, April 2008.
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~red-bombshell:iconred-bombshell: Apr 25, 2008, 6:11:21 PM
HAHAHA....I soooooo love this. Know the feeling all to well.

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:blackrose:And we shall suffer, we shall feel pain rising in us untill it becomes so unbearable that we know it must stop. But it won't stop; it will go on rising and rising, like a screaming voice:blackrose:
*b1gfan:iconb1gfan: Apr 27, 2008, 10:32:41 PM
Ahhh the stupid fucking modem poems...how priceless they can be
~StrangeChilde:iconStrangeChilde: Apr 28, 2008, 6:53:39 PM
Poetic expression of frustration: they're something usually linked to sexual frustration, but are only slightly less often used to express modem-related rage.

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In the year thirteen hundred and thirteen,
a little boy died, who had the exact same scars as me.
-Jeffrey McDaniel, "Lineage"
*b1gfan:iconb1gfan: Apr 28, 2008, 7:12:58 PM
^_^....it's good to expand the form then! ^_~
~Soldierofmisfortune:iconSoldierofmisfortune: Jul 19, 2008, 4:33:35 PM
Wonderful. It's amazing what you can express with a Haiku after all...

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Itīs better to regret something you did than something you didnīt.
~StrangeChilde:iconStrangeChilde: Jul 19, 2008, 6:43:25 PM
The most limiting forms can sometimes be the most fun to play with.

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In the year thirteen hundred and thirteen,
a little boy died, who had the exact same scars as me.
-Jeffrey McDaniel, "Lineage"
~Soldierofmisfortune:iconSoldierofmisfortune: Jul 21, 2008, 2:00:42 PM
How true. I often find myself having an easier time finding inspiration while limiting myself somewhat.

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Itīs better to regret something you did than something you didnīt.
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